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Active voice in the fuel duty and PTA posts - #1479
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Max's rule (28 Oct 2026): active voice in everything written for PE. No passives, and no "be + preposition" spines. Ten wording changes, drafted by the Autumn Budget voice sweep and checked by an independent reviewer. No figures, links or citations change. Fuel duty post: lines 504, 518 and 532. PTA post: lines 1, 16, 46, 70, 965, 972 and 990. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5.5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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These are the independent review's non-blocking suggestions on #1479, all wording only. They fix PTA line 16's stiff "who" clause, swap "uses" on line 990 for a word not used four times, and turn reduced passives and "be + worth" into active verbs. No figures, links or citations change. Fuel duty post: lines 512 and 549. PTA post: lines 16, 32, 738, 978 and 990. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5.5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
PTA line 978 now says the full PTA is 20% of the gap "rounded up to the pound", as line 17 states (£93.28 rounds up to £94), so "equals" holds exactly. On fuel line 512, the VAT change gets its own clause so it no longer reads as one of the modelled duties. Wording only. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5.5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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Independent review at d6c9675 (the whole PR, 018ea75..d6c9675): approve, with no open findings. The change is wording only. The reviewer was an Opus 5.5 agent, because most Codex lanes were on operator hold and the open ones were busy. It reviewed in three rounds:
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Audit note for the admin merge of #1479 at d6c9675.
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This PR applies Max's style rule from 28 October to the live fuel duty and Pension Tax Allowance posts: active voice in everything written for PolicyEngine, with no passives and no "be + preposition" spines ("is above" becomes "exceeds"). Prepositional uses of "above" and "below" stay.
The changes are style only. No figure, link or citation changes. "For context, …", "The OBR used it but could not certify it" and the Budget quote on PTA line 965 all stay as they are.
It changes live posts, so it lands under Max's standing go for the voice sweep's follow-up PRs, relayed by the coordinator: "Seats merge each when green". That go needs CI to exit 0 and an independent reviewer to confirm the change is wording only.
Fuel duty post (
fuel-duty-cut-extension.md)Line 532 does not name who changed the policy because the source doesn't either. The EFO (chapter 3, footnote 1, and the foreword) says only "Small changes were made to the policy parameters".
PTA post (
pension-tax-allowance.md)Review follow-ups (c0f6e12, d6c9675)
The independent review made non-blocking suggestions on the first commit. These commits apply them, again wording only. The "After" text for PTA lines 16 and 990 here replaces the text in the PTA table above.
PTA line 978 adds "rounded up to the pound", which matches line 17 (£93.28 rounds up to £94), so that "equals" holds exactly. Fuel line 512 gives the VAT change its own clause, so it doesn't read as one of the modelled duties, and it says nothing about the sign.
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(is|are|was|were|be|been) (just |still |even … )?(above|below)left.posts.jsondescriptions for both posts need no change.The Autumn Budget voice sweep drafted the pairs, and an independent Opus reviewer passed each one. The fuel duty review seat added the line 504, 518, 532, 1, 16, 46, 70, 972 and 990 candidates.
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